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October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good story overall so far and nice twist with conrad being a elite I didn't see that coming.
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I hope you update soon. :)
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice!
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful halo story! The way you capture the elite's point of view (being confused with human cultures and not so at times) over Jan's is really well done. I would love to see the next chapter, update soon!
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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! You wrote this beginning chapter in such a way that it tricked me into thinking that 'Conrad' was human. Bravo! (even though looking back there were a few hints...)
I actually love these types of stories that transcend intelligent species to try to make a love story work. I'm going to read the next chapter right now!
I actually love these types of stories that transcend intelligent species to try to make a love story work. I'm going to read the next chapter right now!
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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hm...this will be interesting to see where this story goes...even if this is a little unbelievable as far as thinking that the burden of disposing of 'Conrad' in the woods was the head scientist' duty.
Looking forward to the next chapter...and after looking at the time stamps, I hope you haven't given up on this story...
Looking forward to the next chapter...and after looking at the time stamps, I hope you haven't given up on this story...