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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Ruean but if you want some advice on your story then I'd suggest more detail on the missions and surroundings that' s about all I see wrong with it ;) hope to see more sooon
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
been followin up on your story its really. Ruean and Jak are a cute couple. Can't wait to read more ;) Tido
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damnit why did you have to leave such a cliffhanger XD can't wait for next one :D
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October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay yet another chapter I can't wiat for the next
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha Daxter walked in can't wait to see whats next
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ugh there are hardly any good fanfics out there I'm finally glad I found one..very good chapter I feel so bad for Ruean :( can't wait for more
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahh ive been waiting for you to update very good chapter can't wait for more
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is really interesting and so sad I'll be waiting for more :D