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for Intimate Rivals

by Salysha

person HeartfulPeach
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 1
Aww... that was way too cute for me when Hwoarang wished him a good night at the end. I'm liking this story! ^_^
CHAPTER 2
This is getting interesting... Still loving this!
CHAPTER 3
I just can't believe what I have just read; Jin and Hwoarang, together, in a small bed, cuddling...
I don't know if it was your intention but that was incredibly cute and fluffy, I loved it!
CHAPTER 4
Another "Jin", that made me lol. Jin sure is the caring type XP
CHAPTER 5
"This was getting way too mushy" <- that's the way I love it XP
Hwoarang finally took the first step, though it was Jin who pushed him into doing it; anyways their first kiss was adorable ^_^
CHAPTER 6
A little angst in here but I think that, in the end, it made the whole relationship take a few steps
cHAPTER 7
Just 3 letters: HOT! (exclamation mark doesn't count XD) Let me repeat myself, this is getting hotter X_X
CHAPTER 8
Yep, Jin looks serene and calm on the outside but deep inside he is definitely a perv. That makes me love him more ^//^
CHAPTER 9
Gotta love this chapter, how can't I?! Incredibly amazing, to say the least
CHAPTER 10
They look so great together, maybe perfect O_O Anyways this is one of the best stories I have ever read, I love your style and loved every chapter, heck I am even putting the reviews for every chapter! I felt that you should know how great you are ^_^ It looks like this will continue, I sure hope so!
person rogueremy
schedule November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe no one's reviewed this yet... it's AMAZING!!! Thank God i found it! I've been looking for a decent tekken fanfic for like years now! It's my fave pairing, and the characters have been written really well indeed! I mean they way the tournament's been described with the matches and the bedrooms and stuff is genius. It's really believable that way because of the description of matches, since thats what tekken's about. I can actually see this happening which is an incredible achievement for game fanfic! Jin and Hwoarang have real chemistry in the story and i can believe it all! :) Please continue writing this spectacular story, i mean it gives an original insight into how the actual tournament would be like, which the game itself hasnt ever done! And the romantic scenes are soooo hot, really! Especially the rated M and NC-17 ones, but even aside from those, i enjoyed the other chapters with story development too (which is rare). Spectacular! I noticed that there was a bit of time between the latest chapter and the one before, but i'm hoping you'll continue writing and post soon! Please dont leave it hanging like 90% of other stories here! Oh and definitely continue showing cameos and small parts with other charcters too; i liked Steve's involvement! :)
Hope to read more soon! :D
P.S, I never write this long for anyone!