rate_review Reviews

Hey, that bat shit insane acid trip with Dragon Gods just happens to be one of my favorite games of all time! How can you say no to Karsh and Fargo? Lol, anyway, I digress. Again, never thought much of Crono's mother but you seemed to shed a good deal of light onto her and her body. The idea of her being a nympho-maniac her teenage years doesn't surprise me and the fact that she had been so depraved made for some really interesting sex scenes.

I just wished the last scene with Magus lasted longer, poor fellow, thinking he finally got some pussy when he rammed his damn dick on the wrong hole. Good story and hot overall. And poor Crono completely oblivious to it all.

can i just say that the crono cross joke was fucking awesome

great ending, I hope you make a better story later (though it will be hard to top this)

You'd better do a sequel, is all I have to say. Leaving us hanging like that...

But seriously, nice work. The final sex scene could have been a little more involved, but oh well.

Girl-on-girl is hot. And you're good at it.

I suspect the conclusion is drawing near? Can't wait!

I almost came just from Lucca licking Marle's feet...please, please make this into a girl orgy next chapter! Or at least have Ayla go to town on Gina!

Hey, sometimes you need to let loose and screw around a bit before you feel comfortable writing. Of course they're out of character from what they're like in the actual game, but I think Chrono Trigger is renowned enough and the setup is in such a way that it doesn't come off like the goal of the fic is "hurr I'm going to make all the women whores just because." In other words, closer to parody and random silliness than anything else.

I like the truth or dare scenario too; I haven't used it yet myself, but it seems like it would be a fun way to prod for unusual situations with characters with a murky territory between consensual and non-consensual mixed in.

Woo, an update!! Yay!

Another excellent chapter. I really like the way you've hooked into how rowdy Lucca seems to get when she lets her hair down (I'm minded of her comments when you attmept to refuse to drink with her at Ayla's party, and how much hidden meaning the words seem to have from her turn of phrase at that point, heheh), and how closeted Marle is underneath, despite her adventuresome spirit.

One small technical comment for this chapter, and you know I bring them up becuase I lvoe the story you're telling, the phrase, early on:
"Unsatisfied, Gina groaned and darted up, a bored expression on her face." I know WHAT you're saying, yes, and I understand exactly what you're describing, but at the same time, the words jar with each other in a way that doesn't quite read well, made me double-check it, so it pulls you out of the story reading it.

Other than that, a great update, glad to see you're still working on this!

-Niara

I laughed even harder this time than last time! What's next? xD

Nice addition with chapter 11. As is often the case with Ayla, there's a lot of smirk-worthy moments, which you brought across well. One small thing though; As far as I can recall, throughout the course of the game, Ayla pretty much never uses any pronouns at all, and for the most part you've mirrored that, but you did have a couple of "Me"s and "Your"s slip in there along the way, which I did find myself noticing.

Other than that, nice.

-Niara