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by DrBXXIII

schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this was a fun chapter
person KageSora
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing chapter. I really enjoyed this quite a bit! I half pity Decus, he'd probably stay with her until she went to far and killed him, really.

Anyway, amazing chapter. I feel a bit bad for poor Martmart and Emil, yet at the same time... Daddy's severed head is the perfect gift from Alice, really.

I was rather surprised by the part where the monsters were allowed to eat Brute alive. Alice really is cruel. Yet I pity her, greatly, for what you've had her go through in the past--and it explains so much. I hope you write a third chapter!
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oohhh, i love this pairing, and you brought them back alive in the story too, what a lucky find (I've never found any fics of the two up til now...except things like one-sided poems or something...)

I really REALLY hope and encourage you to continue! ^^

oh...and kill Marta off while you're at it (lol, just kidding, just kidding....I think...)