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by JonathanRL

schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Better. You still need work with spelling, punctuation and grammatical construction but far better. The detail in Durotar is good and the trollspeak is beginning to show promise. Yes I'm being hard on you but this is much better work than the first one. And that's a perfect spot for fooling around I always thought.