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May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Are you done screwing my brother? Good, tell him to get his ass home!"
Best. Line. Ever. XDDDD
Loved it!
Best. Line. Ever. XDDDD
Loved it!
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October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i luffle this so hard. why does this have no reviews. well, hell. it does now!!! i love hoe reno knew the whole time! XD i kinda figured when he stayed on the line, im like "wait a minute. hes trying to stay on the phone!" i wouldnt be surprised if he was wacking it to poor ol' roxy. yah, i admit im a huge ARR fan.. XD i hope you make more. and i fell like i forgot to say something....hmmmm. oh yah! ILY! *glomp* 8D
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September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
xD That was hilarious! My favorite part was Roxas excuse about cooking tacos. :3 Great story!
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March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ROFL LMAO!!!! That is an elder brother who knows the younger WAY too well!!! LOL...brillant!!!
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha ha! Reno is such a perv...you just know he was having fun messing with Roxas' head while Axel had his way with him.
Great story! Keep it up!
Great story! Keep it up!
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was funny! I thought Roxas' reaction to Reno's interference was priceless, it really made me laugh. A little clearer detail on the scene between Axel and Roxas would have gone a long way how ever. It was at times confusing and at the worst I could hardly make heads or tales of it.
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SOOOOOOOOO HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!
...And hillarious!!! xDD
^__^ You're a great writer!!
...And hillarious!!! xDD
^__^ You're a great writer!!
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I'm not a big Axel-Roxas fan, but this swayed my mind. Thank you.
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mwahahahaha!!! *dies laughing* That was priceless. I can soooo see Reno doing that to poor Roxas, the sadistic eye-candy. ^__^ well done!
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, I liked your fic. You should think about making this into a longer story, it'd be a very nice opening to a story with the same humor that others try too hard to portray. (And I think everyone loves some AkuRoku smuttiness :D You're off to a good start.) I didn't find any mistakes within your story, something that I loved! Take care!
~ Talla
~ Talla