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for The World as it Should Be

by TaurusLizzie

schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sad that it's ended, glad the loose ends are tied up...upset that the heroine is left unsatisfied and giggling that the hero of the piece is out there fornicating his brains out once more...please do keep up the good works
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm it almost feels like a conclusion but I hope you're going to update again. Beautifully written.
person chedorii
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can't wait for more!
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh great chapter, I found myself thinking about this story last week and wondering if Treris would catch up with her sister. More please!
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah! I did not expect that from the troll. Great chapter!
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I knew I remembered Deydis! I loved "Native Tongues" and I'm excited about this one too. You are prolific writer! Lucky readers :)
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Vishina! This story is really gripping. The sexy times are very hot, the action is well-written and exciting (I'm jealous! I have trouble with that) and the plot is absorbing and nicely-paced. Really good job.
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know I'm bad for making cliffhanger endings of chapters but...OMFG please don't do that I wanna know what's happening!!!!!!!!!
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is captivating me.
person wisterya
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! The characters are so alive and expressive. I can't wait for more chapters :)