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by jadedragon83

person ileyna
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! That sucks about the suprise reformat but this is great :D Can't wait to read more!
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to cry if you don't update soon. Ah, too late. *sob*

This is what happens when you write WIN stories!
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm glad you're writing this. I loved "Of Age and Innocence." The troll's attitude is really funny to me. He has a completely different inner voice than the elf and you've done a wonderful job of fleshing out his personality.
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters in a short time makes me a very happy little imp. I love you even when you don't update... but I love you more when you do. Like a climax. A fix of heroin. Troll heroin. AND IT IS GOOOOOOOD.

Hehe, seriously though, I'm actually glad that they don't get down and dirty post haste. Don't get me wrong, can't wait for the nasties, but the buildup is just excellent. And I love that you are describing how they have changed over the years, it's details like that that just makes your story more stellar than most. *smooch*
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
glorious!...outstanding!!...marvelous!!...MORE and FASTER damn you!!!!...*whimpers quietly* I can almost 'see' these two...so makes me wanna try and write more (hard with this many RT distractions)
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot! More! and TY for the dedication :) I have started a couple hordies myself now, so you might see a few more stories in the future, at least if I can ever finish Cali's. :p
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I gots a dedication! Woot! :)

You're such a TEASE! It bothers me a little that she doesn't know who he is, but otherwise, awesome :) Am quite cooly and collectively chomping at the bit for more, ha-ha :P
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:'3 -glomp-
person ileyna
schedule August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So good :) I really enjoy your style and the voice you've given your characters! Keep up the good work! :D
person ileyna
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More soon :D I love these characters and I adore NelfxTroll! Soon, please :D