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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! She bore him a child? Holy moly, this sure adds to the intrigue!
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please lease please don't let this story be over. I love it, it actually gave me a few thrills. Atal....Atal is a man after my own heart, I totaly relate to him. Please give him a happy ending!!!
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!!! I'm loving this!
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGGG I love Atal so much. In this chapter I particularly enjoyed the first person POV. His personality and inner monologue are amusing and fucking sexy... I just really love him.
The new elf is intriguing! I did not expect you to introduce another female at all! I'm so glad to see an update from you and I hope you keep writing.
Oh also I liked your description of his jealousy... num.
The new elf is intriguing! I did not expect you to introduce another female at all! I'm so glad to see an update from you and I hope you keep writing.
Oh also I liked your description of his jealousy... num.
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December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! an update!! (this is smachitpower from dA, by the way XD) This story is really entertaining for many reasons. First, I love Eruanna and how she has gone from spoiled princess to a woman who can take care of herself. I love her reactions to Atal and the chemistry they automatically share...even when they want to kill each other. He is dead sexy and there's not a whole lot she can do about it except huff an exasperated sigh while wishing he'd grope her! XDXD....I believe one of your illustrations of the two of them show that perfectly ;-) And ye gods! this last chapter! What in the HELL are you trying to DO to them?? LMAO Jazlok sure has perfect timing!!! XD
Anyway, you are a very gifted writer and I have really enjoyed these two characters. They are so easy to relate to and likable. Please keep writing! Damn, these two are soooo HOT!!
Anyway, you are a very gifted writer and I have really enjoyed these two characters. They are so easy to relate to and likable. Please keep writing! Damn, these two are soooo HOT!!
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated! Loved this chapter... it's sexy and sweet, a really fun read.
Bummer about the break in though, haha!
Bummer about the break in though, haha!
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you maybe feeling like writing more? Soon please? Excellent!
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHERE BE NEXT CHAPTER?! *eye twitch*
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September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"I had a cousin that liked to frequent the area, as the fishing was particularly fine, but it was currently out of season."
Zin the fisherman! :D
I noticed "boredom" as "bordem" but didn't quite pick up anything else. I was kinda just reading for my own enjoyment though. XDXD
Zin the fisherman! :D
I noticed "boredom" as "bordem" but didn't quite pick up anything else. I was kinda just reading for my own enjoyment though. XDXD
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September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. I really liked what Atal said at the end, “I be sensin' a trend here, mon.” Makes my mind ring in anticipation.