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While I am enjoying this story, considering it is probably the only slash story worth reading for Bully, I am having a hard time trying to read it. Your english and spelling is good, but your puntuation, paragraphing and Grammar need a lot of work. I would be happy to BETA this story for you to repost chapter by chapter, just so it is a little clearer to read, or pass on some tips as to how to make it more simplified.
Please understand I am not having a go at your writing, the story is great, but it would be even better once fixed up and flowing properly. If you're interested, contact me and we can work something out. Cheers,
Shikiblade