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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice story Tycho. Good characters, hot sex scene, I actually laughed out loud a few times too, especially at some of Duke's lines. And your writing is great - just the right amount of detail. Any chance of a second chapter? Maybe have the aliens make a reappearance, work in some non-con sex with Lara? Either way, definitely a 5/5 story!
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, alright, I'm saying this now, this was AWESOME! The right amount of parody and seriousness always works, but with the DUKE, you got it perfectly. Any later chapters will be reviewed with the same glee, if you continue
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the funniest story I've read in a while. It was so funny in fact that it made me decide to actually become a member of the site instead of being an anonymous reader. You have DK's attitude down to a T, I simply couldn't stop laughing at his entrance to the scene or Lara's first reaction to him and his overrall attitude. Really hope you update this sooner rather than later!