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for Time to Relax

by karlminion

schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you definitely should continue this!
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You were kind enough to review my story, I need to reciprocate!

Well-written, a good quick read. I especially like the ending, and wonder who might have heard our amorous couple through the open window. Pretty good characterization; I think we have similar ideas about Lloyd, and Sheena as well. As you could probably tell, I love this game, and this pairing.