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for Kingdom Tart

by HondoOokami

person Anon
schedule July 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hot story, very curious about Roxas' plans for Namine's feet :P
person Heirarch Andaronius
schedule May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well this story makes my pants a lot tighter. The amount of details and whatnot have made this story seem like it was written by a well accomplished author. I really hope you continue updating this because I hate it when such a good story gets forgotten about by their author?
schedule January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
To this i've gotta say "Goddayum!" THAT was one hell of a chapter, Hell this is one HELL of a fic thus far! and im not normally one for Kingdom Hearts fanfics xDD

I'd sure love to know where you get your imagination from or how the hell you describe scenes like you have but this already has given me some ideas for my Pokemon fic -Everyone Is Doing It- so as 'messy' and 'unorganised' as you consider some of your chapters to be. I've found each scene more jawdropping then the last: Roxas's livin like a GOD!!! what was he in his past life?! Jesus Christ?! xDDD Keep at it! and consider me hooked and -in a manner of speaking- Subscribed!
schedule November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic as always.
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When you say Fuu, do you mean Fuujin, Seifer's friend? Apart from that, got good potential :D
person Raug'moss
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Keep up the good work.
person the dirty birdy
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, this really hit the spot, ill have to keep my eye on this one
person Leeslane
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Hope Namine appears soon.
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Great story so far can't wait for the next installment though there is 1 thing I would like to know: did the series called Hatsu Inu help inspire you? Well l8tr."

HATSU INU!!! Thanks a bunch, matey-boy. That doujin did inspire me for parts of this story, however, I've only read it the once and couldn't for the life of me remember the title (Thanks again!), the original artist or where I read it. I'll be sure to thank the series creator for the inspiration in my next update.
person JyubiRyu
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far can't wait for the next installment though there is 1 thing I would like to know: did the series called Hatsu Inu help inspire you? Well l8tr.