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for Heroine for Hire

by thegreatshaggy

person mikey
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oaky first off pulverizer what the hell did you expect in a world like the capitol wastland? and biseds that kinda stuff is hot heh but anyway awesome storry man keep up the good work i love the long chapters and that its not pureley smut i cant wait to see how this played out heh allthough i was thinking that being brought up in a vault anya would know enouge about the slave coller to disarm it i mean think about it most peopl in the capitol wastland arent very educated in since and mecahnices so its probaly a very simple mechinisem with a radio reciver and a presure sensor to detecht if its being forced off and all you have to do it snip the wires without triginging the sensor basic concet
person Hey
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa whoa whoa there mangs. I love this fic, I can't wait to read the next chapter, I really hope Sarah Lyons and the Lone Wanderer get romantically involved like they should have had the option to in the game. But be cool, fools, the reviewer's got a point. Rape's not unusual for the CW, but that doesn't mean you don't have to warn about it. By the very simple rules of the site, you should be listing the types of potentially offensive content in your fics by your story tags. If someone's surprised and put off by finding rape in a fic that DOES have the nonconsensual tag, then that's their own fault. But if they're surprised and put off by finding rape in a fic that doesn't have any indication that it's involved in the summary or at least chapter notes, that's the AUTHOR'S fault. It's not out of place in a Fallout 3 fic, but that has NOTHING to do with whether the story should have a warning about it. Be rad, chads, don't hate a guy just cuz he's right.
person Nozer112
schedule July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, ouch...That was an interesting twist. I can't wait to see what type of hell Anya rains down on Bannon for that. And Cherry. After that I'm really hoping that Anya finds that one special person. For now, I'm going to put my vote in that it'll be Sarah. I really hope it's Sarah...

Anyway, great job again, can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Nozer112
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing first chapter! I was wondering how long it would take Fallout 3 to get a yuri story that doesn't look like it will all be PWP. I like the way that you've tied in all of the things Anya has done from the story, like with the Aqua Pura, fighitng the Enclave, and Maddog's nickname. Plus, with the same she seems to be getting tired of her goodie-goodie life, as she finally starts to realize the asteland isn't really going to change...Anyway, great first chapter and I hope to read more soon.

One a sidenote, I hope you're planning on Anya finding that special someone, but that's just a hopeless romantioc talking, so you can ignore that. Good job, can't wait to read more!
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!!!!! fallout 3 yuri!!!! this is so rad! hot and sexy, but it was all in character and good writen! cant wait 4 the next chapter....and im totaly stoked 4 when sarah shows up, shes teh sex!