rate_review Reviews

A nice ending to a great story. Looking back through it...Wow, there's just plenty of room for more to be written. I'm really going to be keeping my eyes open, looking for more of your stuff. You're a great writer, I can't wait to see what you put up next!

nice i love the ending heh i wish there was a little more about the new settlement wich it mise well be im sure ppl are gonna want to live there lol but ohwell amazingly wonderful story and i think its the first complete in the falloutsection good work

Yay, Autumn is dead! And about time...Anyway, great chapter, as usual. Is this the next to last chapter, or do you have more shapters planned for this?

Wow, didn't see that twist with Athena coming...

Anyway, I really, really want to read more. And I'm really hoping for a happy ending. If I'm any good at judging characters, if Sarah does die, then I just don't think Anya can live with it without basically going way back down the Bad Karma route...

Anyway, now I wanna see if Athena can be redeemed, and what happened to the others.

Just wanted to say that this story has been fantastic, I've been wanting some serious Fallout 3 Femslash, and Lone Wanderer/Sarah is a great option. I'm not expecting a happy ending, sadly, but still, it's in chraacter, so I can't complain!

Anya's luck sucks, huh? Anyway, another great chapter. I really have to learn how to critic better, as I would love to be able to actually give suggestions that would help...But as I read this, everything looks just fine to me. I'm really curious as to who these Reavers are though, with all the mythological and religious babble. I've always liked mythology, and I really like Athena's name...Heh, I wonder if she shares her namesake affinity for fighting.

Anyway, I definitely can't blame you for not including Mothership Zeta...I actually was stupid enough to buy it, and yeah, it isn't that great. I figured at least you might learn a bit about the war, but aside from some medics abducted from Anchorage...Nothing. Oh well.

But keep up the good work! Can't wait now to see what's happened with the rest of Anya's party, and how things with Athena work out. Hopefully Anya's luck with this new friends doesn't end like how it has with Lucy, Hoss, and Moira (I know she wasn't killed, but that friendship kinda poofed, didn't it?).

I really need to think of better ways to describe these chapters, or at least learn how to offer contrustive criticism...But I'v enever been a good critic unless it was my own work, and in those instances, everything I wrote was horrible.

Anyway, another awesome chapter, and one that made my day with the Sarah and Anya scene. If Fallout 3 was actually designed to have romance options (actual ones, not the crazy Clover chick and the other crazy one in Big Town) I don't see anyway that Sarah wouldn't be one of them. Though, I was a bit disappointed that Cherry wasn't killed. I didn't like her in the game, really didn't like her after what she did in this story, but...Oh well.

Now, I have a random question for you. Are the Point Lookout and Mothership Zeta downlaods going to affect the story? Just wondering, feel free to ignore the question. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more!

While I had been hoping to see what Anya would do to Bannon for the stunt he pulled, now...Dang, Colonel Autumn. At least, I think it was Colonel...Been a whil.e since I played the game. Anyway, great chapter. Somehow I knew the Brotherhood would pull something like that with Anya. It always seems to happen in situations like that. And yay, Sarah showed up!

I'm really enjoying this story, so keep it up! You're doing a fantastic job and I can't wait to read more.

Given Anya's contributions to the Brotherhood of Steel, its highly strengthened position in the Wasteland thanks to the salvaged Enclave technologies and weapons, Anya's honorary position as a Lyon's Pride member, Elder Lyons's morals-first approach to governing and military strategies, the lack of military organization and weapon technologies of the slavers in and around Paradise Falls, and the BoS's familiarity of Anya's effectiveness as a one-person attack squad, it's HIGHLY out of character for Elder Lyons or Sarah to deny Anya's request on those grounds--or to conceal any secret motives to deny her request. Everything else is in this chapter and the rest of the fic is good and characteristic of the game's characters, but that part is completely off from what the game shows us. Good chapter other than that, though. Look forward to the next. Stupid Autumn.

Damn, I had liked the first chapter, but didn't see the rape coming in the second. I would have expected some violence and angst considering FO3 is all gloomy and dystopian, but I would have certainly skipped the fic if NonCon had been one of the warnings. Please put it in the fic's, or at least the chapter's summary so that the readers may be forewarned.