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i'm interrested in writing it

this story is getting interesting. update soon.

You should so continue this! I would love you forever!I have looked and looked for a stroy lke this a now I have found one! Please don't discontinue this story! I love your outlook on Axel and just... EVERYTHING~! PLEASE I NEED MORE~<3333

Freaking hot XD

Oh my. This is AMAZING. I made an AFF account just to review this story. I'll be looking forward to future chapters! c: ♥

Holy I love you! sorry thats kinda werid but this is so amazing i am working on my own and i have writers block. while reading this something popped into my head dont worry it has nothing to do with yours promise when i post it you should read it. you are making more right? LOVE YOU! again kinda weird lol <(^.^)>

Hi Im Dani, and I just want to tell you that this story, is the reason why i made an account on AdultFF. :O Im not kidding. haha this story made my day when i read it! its been exactly what ive been looking for! and you know how that is, im sure of it. Its hard to find that fic thats perfect. AND THIS WAS THE ONE! Ive been meaning to get on the computer and make a account, and today i did it. I REALLY REALLY WANT MORE TO THIS! MOOORRREEEE-ERERERER! haha:) im spazing out on you, its just im totally wanting more to this. and i hope i can enspire you along with everyone else!>.< I love the character you give Axel, cuz thats exactly what i imagine.

So, point blank, I made a AdultFF account..all..for you. Be flattered..e_e be very, flattered. LMAO! I cant wait<3333333

Pleeeeaaasse add more.

I really like the way you write. Normally I don't like the high school or au motifs for stories but the way you wrote it was really nice. I like the way you wrote axel so far as a sadist but not making him completely one dimensional and just stopping at him enjoying the giving of pain. The story felt well thought out and I like your writing style. I would suggest looking through and fixing a couple of typos and there was a continuity error(in the first chapter you say roxas has all but one class with sora but then in the second you said otherwise if I remember correctly) but other than that I really enjoyed this.

I really like the way you've portrayed the characters and the story line is to die for!! hope you update soon! :))