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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To Eli Frost,
You, sir, are a god. I only just began reading your Zelda fics, but after the first three chapters of 'Veil of Twilight,' I had to sit down and polished off your OoT story in one sitting. In comparison, I notice Link is a lot more emotional and vocal in this fic. It's different, but different is good; and if it suits whatever story you're cooking up here, then I wouldn't dare naysay it. Please, I beg you, if it is possible notify me when more chapters of this are up. I await them eagerly. Keep up the exceptional work.
-Lord Joshua Carty.
ps. I want nothing less than to impede your story in any way, but TP has such a delicious selection of lady-types... as long as it fits in your grand design, try and show Agitha some love :) She's so adorable, but she needs to have some passion for something that has less than six legs.
You, sir, are a god. I only just began reading your Zelda fics, but after the first three chapters of 'Veil of Twilight,' I had to sit down and polished off your OoT story in one sitting. In comparison, I notice Link is a lot more emotional and vocal in this fic. It's different, but different is good; and if it suits whatever story you're cooking up here, then I wouldn't dare naysay it. Please, I beg you, if it is possible notify me when more chapters of this are up. I await them eagerly. Keep up the exceptional work.
-Lord Joshua Carty.
ps. I want nothing less than to impede your story in any way, but TP has such a delicious selection of lady-types... as long as it fits in your grand design, try and show Agitha some love :) She's so adorable, but she needs to have some passion for something that has less than six legs.
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Great character dialogue.
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is good but I wish that the story would move a little faster. I can't wait for Ashei to show up!
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job man you really know how to write. I only wish your chapters were longer.
The pacing seems fine to me. Taking it a little slower allows you to flesh out the story more making for a better read.
The pacing seems fine to me. Taking it a little slower allows you to flesh out the story more making for a better read.
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
veeery interesting i like it
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A little short, but still great.
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September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
niiice sad bit there in the begeing im wondering how rails or whoever will sruvive but i like it very nice ver nice and FINALY! someone eals who is creeped out by the frigign monkeys
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter man, you know how to get Midna's personality perfectly.
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August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, good to see the return of you trademark humour.
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always. Nice CIT nod.