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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Vaati and Saria are in this one, cool.
I like where this is going.
I like where this is going.
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There was a lemon in this story really? LOL JK i know there was. Your doing a great job keep it up. I read through your first and the moment I saw the first chapter of this I dived right in.
The only questiong which I probably know the answer to it, the second tunic that wouldn't happened to have belonged Sheik (aka: Zelda) would it?
The only questiong which I probably know the answer to it, the second tunic that wouldn't happened to have belonged Sheik (aka: Zelda) would it?
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Nice to see the Sheik/Link references. Yay for Illia/Link pairing (I hope that it ends with those 2 together).
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November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, I like your work.
Hope to see more soon.
Hope to see more soon.
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter man, you certainly don't disappoint.
One thing though I caught one small typo, where it says "“See,” he said to the older woman. “I told you.”" it should say she, Nothing major just thought I'd point it out.
One thing though I caught one small typo, where it says "“See,” he said to the older woman. “I told you.”" it should say she, Nothing major just thought I'd point it out.
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as always. Illias memory is much more realistic than in the game.
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man I know I said it before but your ability to capture characters personalities is dead on.
Knowing your humor this next chapter should be good.
Knowing your humor this next chapter should be good.
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, as ever. Love the humour.
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October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eli Frost,
Another perfectly crafted chapter, full of imagery and beautiful interplay of characters. Again, your work is astounding, and a joy to read. I eagerly away chapter nine. Thank you so much for including Agitha... even if she never 'has her fun' within the bounds of your story, thank you for including my favorite LoZ bit-character ever into your story.
My hat remains off to you, sir.
-Lord Joshua Carty
Another perfectly crafted chapter, full of imagery and beautiful interplay of characters. Again, your work is astounding, and a joy to read. I eagerly away chapter nine. Thank you so much for including Agitha... even if she never 'has her fun' within the bounds of your story, thank you for including my favorite LoZ bit-character ever into your story.
My hat remains off to you, sir.
-Lord Joshua Carty
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October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to see how link deals with her memory loss! great chapter elli!