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I really enjoy your stories. I read Clearer in Time before this one and loved it. This one is just as good. Keep up the good work!!

I like how the stories are sort of intermingling. Hope to see soon where it goes!

Outstanding, as always. Glad to see Link and Ilia are growing close again, that's my fave pairing. Although I hope Midna gets a happy ending as well, just with someone else (maybe Zelda).

Great sex scene btw, I'd almost forgotten how great your lemons are.

Thanks and update soon, from your biggest fan.

Nice to see you're writing again, hope to see more soon.

You are such a perv.
You would have him get all happy for getting kissed by a Queen. Oh oh! A beautiful Queen I mean! :P
So cute.
And the waterfall thing. I greatly enjoyed that. :) perv...

Hello there! I just created an account to tell you how much I've enjoyed your stories. I read all of Clearer in Time and it was an incredible story, original and inspired. A couple of kinks here and there, but nothing that would take away from its greatness. I'm eagerly following your updates on Veil of Twilight, and I have to say so far I don't like it quite as much as C.i.T but that's likely because I feel more closely drawn to OoT. Not to say that V.o.T isn't as good in every way, it's just that as I said it's linked to my personal favoring. Please, keep up the great work. I am an avid reader, and a writer myself (thought I've never done sexual stories lol) and it's encouraging to see people who can write well and convey their story as well as you do. Kudos to you sir, my hat is off. Anyway, I tend to get long winded so I will cut myself off now. Keep up the fantastic work, I'll be reading your future stories and commenting on the accordingly from now on. Oh, and btw if you need anyone to grammar check your work before you submit it I'll be glad to, I know it's always easy to miss one's own mistakes.

Good to see more of this one, though less action than I'd like. I'll wait for more development.

Hope to see more soon.

Great chapter, especially the humour.

So, he aint Links descendant, eh.
He's obviously Dark Link and Malons descendant then. I have a feeling Ilia is Link and Sheiks descendant.

Link/Ilia pairing ftw. Even if I'm right on both counts, they wouldn't related. Besides, I think they belong together.

Great to see a new chapter, brilliant as always Eli.

Always a pleasure reading your stories.

absolutly love the new chapters man i realy like how lila reacted to link in castle town and saria! i love it! i cant wait to see what happens! care to send me any mroe beta drafts?