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for Veil of Twilight

by ericblaire

person Max
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice, good reveal on the bloodline of Link (new Link I guess) and I'm intrigued by the Ganondorf/Zelda thing too.

Keep it up!
schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job as always I'm eager for the next chapter.
person daveb
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Saria...... I hope she gets to be with Vaati in the end. I hope Midna finds someone too, so long as it isn't Link (he belongs with Illia) or Vaati (Saria).

Great chapter, though. So glad to see what happened to the CiT gang. I wonder what Link and Sheik's kid(s) are like.
person Max
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see another installment, and pulling the old link/dark link into it was really surprising, but not unpleasantly so. Very interested in seeing where this goes.

I think readers try to be understanding of writer's block; I do because I can't write for shit, so I don't even get to the point of having a problem with material. Just keep at it and trust me, people will pop in from time to time to see how the story is.

Thanks for your work.
person Nanya
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is one of the best stories I've read on this site, and it's been a fun ride so far. Hope it doesn't stop any time soon. Though, it is too bad that Link and the Great Fairie didn't get more time together onscreen, huh? Still, here's hoping for more of a great story.
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i so love this story and i cant wait for it to continue. it is as good as Clearer In Time in its own way of course...i love the way you brought the two together yet left them ther own stories...so yeah keep up the awsome work


all my love The Maiden Lyra
person daveb
schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brill. It'll be good to see what happened to the CiT gang.
person Max
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how the story is going, especially if you're pulling more of the "nobler" Ganondorf. I intensely dislike evil-for-its-own-sake bad guys, and since Zant is already close enough, it'd be cool if Ganondorf was more the jaded former good guy, since it seems Ganon is still piggy. Stands to reason some of the evil might've left Ganondorf.

All speculation though. Anyways it's always good to see more of your writing, thanks for the latest installment.

Happy writing,
Max
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great job as always keep up the good work.
person daveb
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch15, brill as always.