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for Veil of Twilight

by ericblaire

person Nanya
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, this story gets more and more interesting with each chapter.

Poor Midna, getting knocked like that.

Hope things end up better for them in the future.

MidnaxLink FTW! :D

Hope that the next chapter doesn't take long.
person Max
schedule October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see an update, and I liked the description leading into the reveal on the mask (though I'm pretty sure we all knew which one it was).

As always, keep up the good writing, it's always nice to see more of your work.
person fantome1
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always, but I feel so sorry for Illia when she finds out.. (sad sigh).

Your loyal fan,

Dave
person JB
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's about time!!!That took forever!!!!!
But I liked it.
person Max
schedule August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Been a while since I've been around, but I really like the Ganondorf/Zelda thing so far.

Story stays interesting, thanks for the work.
person JB`
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a hot sex. ^__^ I'm actually happy that those to ended up together... I wasn't sure which idea I liked, of which girl... But I think I like this one better than any of the others. Now I'm waiting for Zelda and Gan. =P Don't disappoint me!!!! ^_~
person dave
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great as always, especially the sex scene. Poor Illia, though.

Your loyal fan

Dave
person JB
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was kind of scary. T_T WHen he put the mask on. It freaked me out! Good job. ^_^ It was still good.
person JB
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that male fairy part!!! It was hot.
person JB
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Link isn't THAT much of a pimp, sir. =P Although, I'm sure you wish he could be.
I really liked how you made him go back in time and meet the other links from the other story you made. ^_^ And the way Zelda met the good Ganon. It's cool! And I'm excited for what is going to happen next! I like your creative ideas!