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Awesome chapter. I'm so glad ur continuing with the story, its so good. Please keep up the good work :D

I must admit I've been lurking while reading this (reading without reviewing) And even though I did try to leave a review the first time; the power went out and I lost the review and I was too tired to bother with restarting this old sluge of a pc, so you get this instead. Funny, funny! This is the funniest ME fic I have ever read and its good too plus all the fun of confused and adorable Kaiden. Keep it up and can't wait to see more!

Oh and happy b-day! The big 2.1. did you have fun drinking? Unless I'm wrong don't most 21st B-days end up with drinks? Hmm, ah well happy b-day anyway! Oh and just a info tip, in my last ME run I got most of my Predator [L M H] Between Ilos and Virmire missions; however, I was sad to find that Tali didn't have any Predator [L M H] but I did find some for the others... Oh does anyone know where I can find a decent guide? Not for the mission or quest really but for the hidden scenes? Well ok so their not really hidden its just easy to miss them. Like the one on the way to get Garrus and Wrex. In the area between the med-clinic and the market place there is a scene to look over the wards which I had only manged to find during my newest play through... heh Um I'm rambling...I'll just shut up now ~_~;

I'll tell you what.. I'll forgive the long delay if you update very,very soon.. :P Sound fair? I'm anxious to see how their night together goes. :)

Duuuuuuuuuuuuude! I'm tired of checking this every day to see if you've written! :D

Hint hint.

Trust me, this is a form of flattery. :P I WANT MORE!

NOW, DAMN YOU, NOW!!

I normally can't stand Liara but you even made her scenes hilarious enough that I actually decided she wasn't so bad! Oh please write more, this is so great. Seriously, how, in the name of all that is holy, did you manage to make Shepard so hilarious and quirky while still making it believable that she saved the freaking universe?

That is just way too funny!!! Poor Liara!! Handcuffs and blindfolds. Crazy wonderful!

Very good. The snack scene was very well written. :) My only wish is that this chapter had come sooner in succession to the last one. ;-)

Hint. Hint. :P

I loved it!! It was hillarious! Poor Kaiden. Great job!!!

I'm in love with Mass Effect too!

Lovely written with a fabulously wicked mischievous Shepard. ;)
I only wish you'd written more! :D

So.... Here's a review:

WRITE. MORE. SOON!

Now... you tell me if that increases the speed of the writing process... :D