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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy and I love it! Can't wait for the next!
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December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! This is sooo good! I can't wait until your next chapter! I love the relationship you've built between Shep and Kaidan. And the "borrow some sugar" line... totally classic. I really like the way you've developed Kaidan, since we don't get alot of insight as to who he really is in the game. Great job! =)
MOAR... please!
MOAR... please!
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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm SOOO glad you haven't forgotten this story! I fluffing love your Shep so damn hard...and the tension between these to is going to freaking KILL me very soon...
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All hail the cockroach. Thank goodness it led to a little action between the two even if it was only a tease. Hopefully a preview of what will eventually come.
Loved the banter between them in the mako about Kaidan's driving.
Handcuff's...yes kinky Kaidan ...but then I always thought he was kinda kinky after the Asari fetish comment.
Left tire then right tire...I love it...driving that mako drove me crazy...I always thought they should have had some conversation in the game about it and I really like yours.
Loved the last line.
An absolute delight as usual. Will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
Loved the banter between them in the mako about Kaidan's driving.
Handcuff's...yes kinky Kaidan ...but then I always thought he was kinda kinky after the Asari fetish comment.
Left tire then right tire...I love it...driving that mako drove me crazy...I always thought they should have had some conversation in the game about it and I really like yours.
Loved the last line.
An absolute delight as usual. Will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
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November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like with all your fictions, this story is well written and holds the interest well. It’s an engaging plotline and the character development is good with it, as will all your stuff. However, I’m finding myself reluctant to allow myself to get involved with it.
My problem is this… I’ve followed your work for years now, since I discovered them and I have the fear that all your Mass Effect fictions will go the way of the stories you have written in the Inuyasha fandom and be left to die out with never being finished. Don’t get me wrong, I adore you work but to be left hanging for so long waiting for endings for things is frustrating to the nth degree. As you know, fan fiction has the bane of things never getting finished so when you find a good author you hope that they will be the one to finish what they start. But, sadly, that isn’t usually the case. This is my problem with your new stories as well. I adore them but find that I am leery to get involved for the above stated reasons.
Don’t take this as a flame, that was never my intent. But I hope you understand what I’m trying to say.
My problem is this… I’ve followed your work for years now, since I discovered them and I have the fear that all your Mass Effect fictions will go the way of the stories you have written in the Inuyasha fandom and be left to die out with never being finished. Don’t get me wrong, I adore you work but to be left hanging for so long waiting for endings for things is frustrating to the nth degree. As you know, fan fiction has the bane of things never getting finished so when you find a good author you hope that they will be the one to finish what they start. But, sadly, that isn’t usually the case. This is my problem with your new stories as well. I adore them but find that I am leery to get involved for the above stated reasons.
Don’t take this as a flame, that was never my intent. But I hope you understand what I’m trying to say.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another awesome chapter. You're really good at creating scenes between Shepard and Kaiden that show both lust and affection for each other. I can't wait to read the next chapter :D
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gotta say I just clicked on not expecting anything and was delighted to find that you had written a new chapter. Finally a real kiss. You really know how to build the anticipation. This is the best Mass Effect shipper fic I've ever read. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is wonderful. I love the way Kaidan and Shepard play off each other. I never saw the possibility of Shepard practically being an alcoholic and pulling Kaidan into it with her but the way you wrote it made it surprisingly believable. A really enjoyable read. I love the relationship they have.I will definitely be checking back to see where you go with the story.
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL! This chapter was hilarious, esp the scene when Shepard and Kaiden were giving Murray that stare-down. Pure jokes! I love how u keep the story funny and sexy at the same time. You add a whole new dimension to Shepard and it's still believable that she defeated Saren. And you've done great at keeping Kaiden in character. I love this story, keep up the great work :D
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First, I'm glad that you understand that not a lot of people review...especially on this site. And thank you for that. A lot of people tend to appriciate the more 'mature material' if you will, from a distance. I happen to be no different than these masses most of the time. Hell, most all of the time.
But, I decided to be brave this once and at least give a review, if an anonymous one.
I have been enjoying this fic more and more with each chapter, it's amazing! And by far my favorite in the Mass Effect section. I love your Shepard, she's not overly nice but she's not overly mean. She's tough, but fun about it... if that makes any sense. And your Kaidan. Oh. God. He makes me laugh just as much as he turns me on. You give just the right amount of suggestiveness without it feeling cheap, and a dash of humor to either break the tension or add more to it.
And..I couldn't be happier that you've added Liara into the mix. She's love in its purest form and to have her so sheltered and confused at the same time is most certainly her nature indeed. I loved the situation with the ferret refrence, I had to bite my hand to keep from roaring at how great it was.
Please keep going with this fic. The more you write the more I want to read. And I hope in kind that my review gives some kind of encouragement for you to do so.
But, I decided to be brave this once and at least give a review, if an anonymous one.
I have been enjoying this fic more and more with each chapter, it's amazing! And by far my favorite in the Mass Effect section. I love your Shepard, she's not overly nice but she's not overly mean. She's tough, but fun about it... if that makes any sense. And your Kaidan. Oh. God. He makes me laugh just as much as he turns me on. You give just the right amount of suggestiveness without it feeling cheap, and a dash of humor to either break the tension or add more to it.
And..I couldn't be happier that you've added Liara into the mix. She's love in its purest form and to have her so sheltered and confused at the same time is most certainly her nature indeed. I loved the situation with the ferret refrence, I had to bite my hand to keep from roaring at how great it was.
Please keep going with this fic. The more you write the more I want to read. And I hope in kind that my review gives some kind of encouragement for you to do so.