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I just caught wind of this story on FF.net and decided to come over here and read it because I enjoy the steamy bits. :-) I love how you've written the characters, starting off as friends and then moving onto something more. And there have been quite a few times where I've had to stifle my laughter as I'm reading, lest my roommates try to find out why I'm laughing so hard. (The 'Small Ferret' sequence and Liara's queries about it being some of my favorite moments) This is a fantastic story and I can't wait for more!

You write sexy fic SO WELL. I love, love, love horny Kaidan! ...And now I miss my ex-boyfriend.

looooove this

so much :)

I'm really enjoying your story, I find the humor especially amusing. "Can I borrow some sugar?" was probably one of my favorite lines! I could never write a 'funny' story, my talent lies more in the angst department...more power to you for being able to make me laugh!

I also wanted to say thank you for your reviews on my story...it's been so long since I've posted a fan fiction I forgot how nice it is to hear other people's critisms, good or bad. Just so you know, your enthusiasm was my motivation for finishing 'That Blurred Line' so quickly, and I've already started the sequel! The first chapter should be up by tonight if I'm lucky.

Hope to see more chapters for 'Parallax' soon!

I normally lurk but I know it's nice to get reviews, so I'm coming out of lurkerdom to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. It has made me actually laugh several times, which is rare for me when I'm reading. Hope to see more from you!

Just to say, I thought your story was great! I was laughing the whole way through! Loved it and thank you. : )

Another great chapter, really sexy too. Thanks for writing about this paring especially after how things went down on Horizon in ME2. I love Kaidan and Shepard together.

it was awesome. i love mass effect as well.
kaiden is an awesome character. but having carth's voice makes it better.
bioware is the shitttt! XD
please make the next chapter soon. your a great writer.
i'm so impatient for the next bit, :P

Excalibur

Great story, it's cute and you have a great way of writing in humor (a skill that isn't easily developed). Will this be going all the way through to the beginning of ME2 (now that the game's out) or are you striking out on your own story?

I'm so glad that you have up-dated!! I hope that your new apartment gets you in the mood for more awesome chaps!