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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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That was beautiful. Absolutely and stunningly beautiful.
You chose an unusual perspective for your narration ("you"), but you also made it work! *thumbs up*
You really had me look into Apollo's head and make me *feel* like I was right there with him.
Also: hot as hell! XD
Great story!
~jea
That was beautiful. Absolutely and stunningly beautiful.
You chose an unusual perspective for your narration ("you"), but you also made it work! *thumbs up*
You really had me look into Apollo's head and make me *feel* like I was right there with him.
Also: hot as hell! XD
Great story!
~jea
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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...goodness...
Please write one with Phoenix and Miles! This was unbelievably sexy!
I swear my room combusted into flames!!! XD
Please write one with Phoenix and Miles! This was unbelievably sexy!
I swear my room combusted into flames!!! XD
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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was seriously hot! I don't even know that game, but I still totally enjoyed the story. First time stories are my guilty pleasure, and it was written perfectly in your fic - the whole wonder and surprise at liking something one didn't even suspect one would like, and the whole slow realisation of the fact that one does indeed like men... And the sex was really sexy! I can't say anything about characterisation, since I don't actually know the characters, but the way you wrote them made me want to give that game a try :D Great story, thanks for writing!