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July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An Erol with the hots for Jak... *shudder* That's scary, man. Perfect for this story, too! X3 lol And Daxter almost let slip a biiiig secret. X3 *giggle* If Jak only knew...
Still, here's hoping the boys can get back into the city. Although it's sounding like there's some big shit that's gonna go down, in the coming chapters... Oh, man, I can't wait! XD
Still, here's hoping the boys can get back into the city. Although it's sounding like there's some big shit that's gonna go down, in the coming chapters... Oh, man, I can't wait! XD
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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Alright, an update!
Been looking forward to this for a while, and it was definitely worth the wait. Great plot development, and a nice bit of lemon and fluff at the end. As always, impeccable grammar and spelling And I can only imagine the look on Erol's face when he finds out his bargaining chip just walked out of camp.
I'm wondering wow you're planning on ending this in one chapter though. What with the army camping outside Spargas and all that.
Well, thanks for completing the chapter for us. Now we've just got the ending to wait on. I was wondering though, once you finish with this and Small Favors, what were you planning on working on next? Just curious.
Been looking forward to this for a while, and it was definitely worth the wait. Great plot development, and a nice bit of lemon and fluff at the end. As always, impeccable grammar and spelling And I can only imagine the look on Erol's face when he finds out his bargaining chip just walked out of camp.
I'm wondering wow you're planning on ending this in one chapter though. What with the army camping outside Spargas and all that.
Well, thanks for completing the chapter for us. Now we've just got the ending to wait on. I was wondering though, once you finish with this and Small Favors, what were you planning on working on next? Just curious.
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great story! i can't wait for your update. it's been about a month, i think, since i originally read this. i love it lots. you're in my favorites!
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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A well placed plot twist, I must admit. And with a hot little alley scene as a bonus :)
Anyways, looks like things have turned even worse for our heroes. First they're outnumbered, and now their prince is taken as a hostage. Hope Dax is able to do something about this mess.
Great chapter, as usual. Don't stress too much on the plot now, take it easy if you have to. Especially with finals coming up soon (or are yours over already?). Either way, good luck with the writing!
Anyways, looks like things have turned even worse for our heroes. First they're outnumbered, and now their prince is taken as a hostage. Hope Dax is able to do something about this mess.
Great chapter, as usual. Don't stress too much on the plot now, take it easy if you have to. Especially with finals coming up soon (or are yours over already?). Either way, good luck with the writing!
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May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O___o Traitors! Traitors in the ranks! Those little rat bastards. >(
*sniffle* What'll happen to Jak? ;^; Hell, how will Daxter fare when Samos and Damas recognize him? XP
Dude, I SO cannot wait until the next update. X3 But I will. =3 See you next time. ^w^
*sniffle* What'll happen to Jak? ;^; Hell, how will Daxter fare when Samos and Damas recognize him? XP
Dude, I SO cannot wait until the next update. X3 But I will. =3 See you next time. ^w^
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rooting for Erol to molest Jak in 3... 2...
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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! UPdate! And I love cliffhangers. X3 More than I should, but I keep coming back for more, anyway. XD
And I love how Daxter remains such a mystery. Of course, I'll love it when he actually has the time to tell his story, but until then watching Jak cope with the fact that his lover isn't entirely human oughta be fun. X3
And I love how Daxter remains such a mystery. Of course, I'll love it when he actually has the time to tell his story, but until then watching Jak cope with the fact that his lover isn't entirely human oughta be fun. X3
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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Short but sweet. I was kinda miffed when you cut the romance short, but it's good to move the plot along as well I suppose. It seems that this war is starting to heat up a bit, and I'm wondering just what part our mysterious Ottsel friend is going to play in it. I'm interested in how you're planning on doing the fighting scenes as well.
Anyways, keep on it! I'm sure it'll turn out great.
Anyways, keep on it! I'm sure it'll turn out great.
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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Torn: (bangs on the door) Jak! I need your help with something very important!
Jak: What is it now?!
Torn: Actually, I forget. I was hoping you could remind me. It does seem like there was something important I had to tell you… Come to think of it, remind me to turn off the stove in my quarters before the fighting starts, would you? I’d hate to forget and leave it on. Again.
Daxter: Is this guy for real?
Jak: Unfortunately…
Torn: Don’t worry, I’ll think of it!
X3
Excellent chapter as usual.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
*sets up camp*
Jak: What is it now?!
Torn: Actually, I forget. I was hoping you could remind me. It does seem like there was something important I had to tell you… Come to think of it, remind me to turn off the stove in my quarters before the fighting starts, would you? I’d hate to forget and leave it on. Again.
Daxter: Is this guy for real?
Jak: Unfortunately…
Torn: Don’t worry, I’ll think of it!
X3
Excellent chapter as usual.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
*sets up camp*
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January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so amuzed and intrigued! Please write more! I'm totally enjoying this story :)