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Gotta love those bluppers....hehe....Heck yeah, Jak & Dax are just too cute! Ya just don't wanna stop playin' with them....hehe...that can totally be taken out of context...oh well!

roflmao XD Well, that's that. Good thing there's going to be an epilogue, though, because more Jak & Dax lovin' is always welcome. ;3

lol Almost everybody was so shocked to see them macking on each other. XD And it was so cute when Daxter thought Jak would be HIS pet. X3 I can only imagine Jak's face at the thought, and it makes me laugh. ^w^

Anyway, until next time! =D

Very interesting plot development; I was kinda wondering where you were going to go from there. Nice to see that you're really getting into this story, even to the point where we get an extra chapter or two.

I enjoyed the parlay situation, and the amount of background you added to Dax's character. I wonder what could be so important that they'd have to cooperate with the likes of Erol though? Guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter to find out.


This was a pretty nice break from your regular romance work (not that we don't enjoy that to death as well), and you've proven you can write action and adventure sequences very well too. Looking forward to the next segment (as always).

lol, i loved the story, and, as always, the bloopers were awesome. the last one made me laugh out loud and my family looked at me like i was crazy. omg. i love you. *huggles teh author*

Well, as glad as I am to see Damas getting put in his place by an Ottsel, I don't like how their appearance got those gears turning in Erol's head. XP Still, nice to hear that the Ottsels want to take Jak with them while Daxter's training resumes. X3 I don't think Damas is going to let him go without a fight, fated hero or not, but at least the duo can stick together. XD

I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^w^ Damas' reaction alone would be worth the wait. XD

Loved this chapter....Samos is in TROUBLE! Poor Dax almost Lost his new toy...*wink, wink*

I. LOVE. This. Story. Seriously. It's the best Jak/Daxter fic I think I have EVER read, even if it's AU. IT IS AMAZING. Expect fanart. I really hope you continue to write this. :'3

yay for the update! i adored Erol's story and attempted rape, loved Jak and Dax's "scene" and lol'd at the outtakes. again. you should never end this story. the impending end is the only thing that saddens me.

Love the story.

Delicious plot with a side order of comic relief and smut for dessert. My favorite~