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Awesome story. There definitely needs to be a sequel to this.

lol i love this story and the last out take just made me laugh. i kind of sad for it to be done. but i still gald it end nicly. so keep up the good work oh and if you ever get the chance please write another fanfic for jak/dax their not alot (at least to me) that make me can't wait till the next instalment. and thank you for even writing this and putting it online
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brittany b. peña
p.s: since i just trun 18 this month i now have an accont on here so your my 1st review on this site so go you ^_^

As always, completely amazing. I have to say, that chapter was crazy amazing. And the bloopers were especially amusing. I accidently woke up my little sis reading them.

hoping for more :o epilogue?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

*bows* You are the master of writing! Loved the story...hell i love all your writing....Hey can ya write a story for me?

Hot sex, with a funny ending. A five-star combo in my opinion. X3 And with the sweetness of Dax wanting to kinda-sorta "redo" their first night together, that sends it up to ten stars. ^w^

And, as always, there's the outtakes. XD lmao

A great end to a great story. ^w^ When I usually read fanfics, the characters are so badly out-of-character I have to stop reading. I am SO glad I don't have to worry about that with you. XD Even when Dax was the mute "slave," his personality shone through every action, and I loved it. X3 Even Erol had an on-the-spot portrayl (the creepy, creepy bastard that I love to hate. X3)

Anyway, great job. =3 I'm really looking forward to your next update, and I know it'll be worth the wait. ^w^

I've just started playing Jak II: Renegade, and I was wondering if the character bases came from that game.

i have to admit, this has to be the best story i've come across in years. keep it up! waiting for the epilogue.

PS, yes, Daxter, you would be a pretty girl.

Well, that was a neat way to wrap everything up. Loved Daxter's opening line this chapter, Jak as Dax's pet would be a nice turnaround. I was kinda surprised to see Tess dropped in there though, you really did a good job with the whole alternate universe theme.

I'm kinda wondering about this prophesy now however...you could probably do a follow-up to this plotline in the future if you wanted to. I do like the current ending, especially with that apology kiss, and the epilogue to look forward to.


Hope to hear more from you soon, you seem to really be on a role now.

Ahhh finally, the "ending" .
Really, really nice chapter...i had to read the kissing-in-front-of-everyone scene about three times ...soo cute :D Cant wait for the last part...

And i would soooo love to see what they do about the child xD That little twisting surprised me. Its also great how well you caught Samos personality and acting about his little Keira :3

As always you wrote something touching and interesting!

Greetings from another one of your happy readers