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for Pure of Heart

by TaurusLizzie

schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry my "I hate you" wasn't clear. Love your work don't get me wrong, dislike what you did....what seems to be about to happen to him and the fact that you left it at such a cliffhanger. Your story your rules but the fans might wanna lynch you after reading.
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that's an ending?????? *growls low* I hate you!!...That's 26 bajillion shades of wrong and you know it....*sighs slumps and pouts*...fix it please...and that's from all the fans of your work
schedule July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just for clarity sake LadyBird, are you objecting to what I wrote, or the fact that I left it hanging? It actually will be wrapped up, I have other stories lined up that tie into this one. But Meleager's story is over. Think of this as a first installment.
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn you!!!...I'm crying my eyes out here, I hate with a passion the heroic death scenarios (yeah shoot me I wrote similar)...but I've enjoyed this a LOT...please post the ending sooooooon
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sitting here crying after reading ch 6. Please do continue updating you write rather well.
schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're off to a good start; definitely interested for more :) I'm curious about the girl; I can't help but wonder if there's more to her than meets the eye...