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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a very sweet story, and I loved reading it. One flaw, though, is that the ending was a bit predictable.
Nevertheless, an excellent read. Keep up the good work!
Nevertheless, an excellent read. Keep up the good work!
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the plot Idea, but i feel like it was choppy. Like she woke up, anddddddddddd they immediately had sex (no detaild) and then they criticize each other, and thennnnnnnnnnnnnn the battle is over and they leave.
I feel like you could've winded it more together, but overall, decent
I feel like you could've winded it more together, but overall, decent
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Excellent writing. The structure was spot on, and characterization was 100%! I could totally see both Ephraim and L'arachel acting just like this in a, *ahem*, 'compromising and arousing' situation. Again, well done; I certainly hope you decide to write more FE8 fanfics, there are FAR too few of those.