rate_review Reviews

I'm very addicted. I'm sorry that I haven't been with you from the start, but I read all the chapters quickly. You're doing very well with the mentality with Sora. I love this story. I can't wait for your next chapter. I'm very curious on why Max couldn't come to pick him up. As for LuLu she was perfect. I've only played FFX once, but that's how I remembered her. Great job! I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter until then n_n

thank you for another amazing chapter! this story has my in such suspense, drawing me in deeper every chapter. ill be defiently looking out for another chapter. thank you again!

yay! another update!
ah im falling more and more in love with this story. thank you and update soon!

Yay!! An update after so long!!! I feel so bad for Sora though. You know damn Xemnes!! Damn him to hell! This story just really gets to me. It makes me feel for the characters. I hope Sora can learn to trust Riku again and will at least open up more with Kairi. I also hope Xemnes gets the ass whipping of his life by both Riku and Max!!! lol anyways I hope writer's block lets you go soon. Can't wait to find out what happens next

Well... This, is a very good story, If I may say.

I'm no learned critique, I'm 'just another 19 year old' but this is a very good story indeed.
And it has a lot of important lessons in it; Not bugging out on your mates when they need you, accepting homosexuality as it is as normal as heterosexuality and even the importance of getting blood tests.

The characters are quick to connect with, like, in the coffee shop I was nearly yelling at my screen to get Sora to talk. Then I wanted to punch the screen to get Riku to talk to him, and I mean really talk to him, even if he wasn't listening. Then when Kairi didn't go after Sora when he left the shop, I wanted to slap her silly, same goes for Riku.

Great story. Hope to read more....
Thanks!

I enjoyed reading this chapter, really. You have a nice style and both your grammar and plot are way better than most other things I came across. The only thing I noticed is that while you described the characters with great deatail, you mostly neglect to picture how the surroundings look like. It's not a big thing really, but it would add a bit more variety to the story if you would insert a few tidbits of describtion here and there, like you did with the kitchen in chapter one.

Otherwise keep up the good work.

My God I want to pound the ever-loving shit out of Xemnas, but I'm sure every Sora supporter/fangirl wants to right now also. I would enjoy plucking every strand of hair off his head; one at a time. Good story, GOOD story. I had to say it twice it's so good. The angst is so overwhelming and I am frustrated to no end that I can't help Sora also. I hope Riku can get through to Sora. He messed up to the infinite power but now that's he trying to redeem himself, I think his father needs to have a "talk" with Xemnas... "OMNI-SLASH!!" (with a little "Kamehameha" on the side, courtesy of Goku)

On a different note; Sephi as Riku's father: GENIUS!! Sephi being with Cloud: SUPER-GENIUS!! I went XD *glee* reading the parts b/t Sephiroth and Cloud. And one more thing: Is Tidus THE Tidus from FFX? If so, where's Wakka and Lulu? I've liked those two :)
Quick conversation b/t me and my b/f: "I don't think Wakka had any say in the matter when Lulu said she liked him and she was going to have babies from him."
B/f: XD *cracks up*

On behalf of other fangirls, I hope this hiatus is worth it and to get out of your funk as soon as possible!

thank you so much for updating! i jumped and literally gasped when i saw this update. it made me very happy.
im sorry about your writers block, and hope things work out. while im dissapointed hearing about your hiatus, i hope things IRL for yougo well. have fun in your hiatus and ill be here when you come back :)

im so glad you updated!
this last chapter was a bit dissapointing. i guess i was expecting more of a development of the story, so i am in great anticipation of your next update.
this, of course, is still one of my favorite fanfictions :)
i love your writing style; how its so very easy to read, but not too simple. i love it and will defiently be on a lookout for the next update.
thank you for writing!

My first time reading a Kingdom Hearts fanfic. Not too bad. I'm anxious for more. :D