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for Finding Lost Dreams

by Lanie12777

person jennifer
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh wow i loved this chapter! i feel so proud for sora finally standing up to his bullies! i love this story so much! i cant wait for the next update. you are an amazing writer plot-builder.
person Iyasu
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Riku finally told Sora! I nearly forgot about Xemnas and his obsession for a bit while reading that. I bet Xemnas is going to find out though, regardless of whether Xigbar tells him or not. People that obsessed just seem to have *ways* of knowing... But if he messes with Riku, I want to see Seph put a hurting on him so bad, he won't know what to do. Then Max could join in the fun. *wicked smile* Can't wait to see the next chapter!
person jennifer
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh this chapter was just what i needed! im so happy that riku and sora are getting along so well!!
and here i thought that it was going to be just a sweet and cute chapter, but you just had to put a little stab in there at the end. but its a good stab ahahaha. i cant wait for your next update!! thanks!
person ADeathlyPale
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woo! I was happy to see you updated. Looking forward to the next one.
person jennifer
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hurrah for a new chapter!
i am so relieved that you didnt give sora HIV. i think that would really break my heart and turn me off from reading it.
this was a sweet and short chapter, but i just wanted to say that it takes usually 2 weeks for a HIV/AIDS test to come back.
i look forward to the next chapter and am really excited for it. please continue writing and im happy to hear you got your computer back :)
person Iyasu
schedule May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so glad Sora's test came back negative! I'm also extremely glad that his friendship with Riku is steadily on the mend. It had to be difficult to tell him everything after their history, but it's good that Sora could trust Riku enough to do it.

One thing, it's not really important, but iPods don't use outside batteries, you charge them via computer.
person ADeathlyPale
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just got into this story but aww, I love it! I feel so bad for Sora, but I'm glad that Riku knows now. Even though I was kind of pissy at him at the beginning! XD
Update when you can and I'll be here to read it! :D
person jennifer
schedule April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
such a swift update i was surprised to see it. but very to see it!
this chapter was very relieving. i feel better for sora now that someone else knows about the rape. im so curious to whats going to happen next! please update soon thank you!
person Holly
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:) yaay !!! I'm so glad Riku actually knows now!!
I love the image of Riku's pleading face awww
anyways awesome chapter can't wait for the next one!
person jennifer
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yes! some progress with riku and sora!
that was such a cruel thing to leave the chapter right there though. well, i guess the anticipation for the next chapter will make it much more satisfying. thank you for the update!