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I just found your story, and I find the concept interesting. I started reading it, and it seems even more interesting. However, it's a tad hard to read when everything in underlined and/or bold.

Man this is well written...
I can't stop reading lol. I meant to review on chapter one and somehow I'm on chapter 4 already.
Love your writing and I wonder if maybe you could review one of mine? I'm putting up my first KH story and I'm nervous lol.

Damn I love this story.
Lol I thrive on angst-fiction.
It's addictive too... I can't seem to stop reading it ay.

Wow you write really extremely well.
I was actually dreading Max's talk along with Sora...
All-consuming little world you got going on here... And I am going to be so gutted when I reach the end :)

THanks so much for reviewing me too... My one KH fanfic holds a special place in my heart and I'm glad you liked it.
Oh yeah, and the same to you, I love the complete absence of grammatical errors.
Seriously I got to the point of ignoring any fic with a certain prevalence of stupid errors.
So yeah its great to find someone who also values the English language lol

Personally I think the expedited test results helped the story flow better.
Damn I love the way you write...

Nooooo thats one thing I hate...
Finding an amazing fic and then having to be patient for the next chapter lol.
I'm not a very patient person :P Especially when left on a cliff-hanger like that!

Cannot wait for the next chapter... Is there an option for update alerts on this site?
There's a couple more chapters of Endless Screams too if you're interested :)

Sora just can't catch a break, can he? Man, I hope Xemnas didn't get him... or Xigbar. Take your time writing, I'd hate to think of you trying to finish a chapter while in pain. As always, good job!

hey i really love this fic, i cant wait for you to update. Keep up the great work I really am looking forward to reading more.

Love as always! It sucks about FF, but we'll live without it. Do you know what prompted the Nazi smack down all of a sudden? I'm glad you moved your stories over here! I'l enjoy following you here as I did on FF! ^__^

Go Sora! I wonder if Saix is going to come and get his too, lol. This was a nice chapter, although I had one problem with it. You have one paragraph, beginning with, "That was the last thing he needed, to let these people inside his head..." and the way it's written, I'm not sure who it's focusing on. It seems like the focus is on Sora, because it follows one that was focusing on him, and also with the subject matter, but then it ends with, "His mind shamefully reminded him that he condemned them for doing the exact thing he'd done to Sora..." which tells me that it's Riku. You should be more specific on this, for I was a bit confused with the first read-through. Or maybe I'm just slow, lol. I don't mind the lateness, I just hope it won't take so long next time!