rate_review Reviews

that was totally aswome,you so have to make another chapter or a sequel i must know what happens next.dante need to find vergil.please make a sequal.please i give a cookies lol.if you want to talk dmc or fanfiction email me at greedsgirl@hotmail.com

I enjoyed reading this story very much! Especially the way you portrayed Dante, I just have no words for this!
Hope, he'll find Vergil!

Very Realistic approach which made the end all the sweeter. A lot of sequel potential too. Great job.

That was a truly awesome story. Very well constructed, very emotional, and very vivid in description. You kept Dante and Lady in character very well and added true depth to Dante's character. When I first hit it, I was worried about the Vergil/Dante sex scene at the end, however, even though it was brief, it was very sweet and really did bring nice closure to the story. There were a few typos, but nothing major that I couldn't read over. Also, there were a few points where the sentence construction was so complex that it threw me off for a second but it wasn't anything major and the story came off for the better with that kind of construction. The one thing that really bothered me though was that I haven't heard the majority of the music that was mentioned in the story, so, I couldn't hear it in my head (that's not your fault though.) Also, excellent word choice, there were a few words in there that I see so infrequently or have never seen that I actually had to look up the definitions (I always like it when I read something that can help me add to my vocabulary.) Overall, very very excellent work, this is definitely one of the better actual story pieces on this site.