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Ohh this was so good and bitter, like dark chocolate. Mmmm the angst. You worked repitiion in a nice way and it didn't sound like he was droning. His words were creepy but beautiful. Hmm I actually don't know what I'm talking about. xDD I just really liked this story.

Hmm I saw Roxas/Sora while reading each line. Both can be the speaker, seeing as how he mentioned the man he left with was "handsome and strong" and other characteristics they do not share. Not that they can't be handsome or strong. xD

Thanks for sharing the story! Hope to see more from you ^^

I enjoyed reading this, and I loved how you made it open-ended. I imagined Saix/Axel while reading this, with Saix the one desperate for Axel. As for the man that Axel left Saix for, I imagined it to be Roxas. It all fits. :)

I think it's marluxia and someone else, but I'm not sure if it's Vexen or larxene. . .

okay it's axel talking about Roxas. right? i'm sure of it. fire, lifeless heart, leaving, sweet but not inoccent. Its Axel to Roxas. And i say the other he is talking about has to be Sora.

I don't know.. the obvious one to me seemed to be AkuRoku. But, some parts made me think otherwise and be confused.