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for Holding On

by jadedragon83

schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I officially have a big crush on this story. Your use of language is beautiful, your writing and the way you weave sentences is excellent. My only complaint would be that there's not nearly enough of this story yet. Write MOAR! Hehe. Stellar work.
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I actually enjoyed having a whole chapter to spend with the main character. I also am entertained by the newest addition to the cast. xD She's adorable.
schedule May 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Rolf is quite the kink. Great follow-up chapter, but I hope we get to see more of Zin in the next one!
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I'm really looking forward to more.
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this story! I enjoy your writing very much, as well as your main character.