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Wow that last chapter amazing. The crazy orgy was hot even though it was non-con.

I'm seriously craving more!

Ch6

Heyyy... I saw you on here today. You better be plannin' on some updates... or else! Well, can't really deliver a valid threat here, but uh... if you don't update, I will... chew on my own foot?

*wub*

Oh my this is fantastic, I'm glad to see you added more.. but please, please finish this, its so fantastic and very smoothly written, you didn't lose me for a moment.

So glad to see another chapter! Nice the way the abstraction of Lilla is finally really pulled in as the third point of a love triangle in the real world. Can't wait for more.

I was waiting sooooo long for the next installment of this! Then, once I saw that you'd posted an update, I had no time to sit and read the new chapter until this afternoon. Torture! I think I've said this before, but I love your main character. He's so real and likable, not a hunk of meat.

Let's see if it will take this time...

I have re-read the fishing seen oh about 20 times. I can't tell you how much I love this chapter. I've tried, but my reviews keep being eaten which I choose to take as a sign that they were inadequate. *sighs*

This was lovely, sweet, exciting, fun... I never would have hoped for this kind of chapter from this particular story, based on the beginning. It's a testament to your talent that you can breach such a gap and make it not only feel natural, but completely engrossing. LOVE IT MOAR PLZ.

Great! So uh, will Zin ever meet this mystery woman?

ch5

Heh, I think I have a love/hate relationship with this story... I love Zin, love Cassara, love your beautiful writing, love the unusual plot... HATE ROLF! HATE HIS NASTY HOUSEKEEPER! HATE WHAT HE DOES TO LILLA! Hate that I think it's kind of hot...

I find myself thinking back to this story rather often. Lilla's diary is *very* hard for me to read, but like your characters, I want to know what's become of her and how she endured her terrible ordeals. Zin is charming and sexy as only a troll can be, and Cassara really surprised me with her quirky cuteness.

And did you say his cousin is named... Atal? Hmmmmm does he know his cousin has a knife to his throat? Hahaha.

I know it's been months since you updated and I am surprised to find that I didn't review this months ago... Lilla's story is so sad and disturbing that sometimes I have trouble coming back to it, but I always do, and continually hope for more. Please keep writing!

This story and your writing is an inspiration to me. Believe it or not, whenever I have a crappy day I re-read this and it makes me hope for something better. Absurd, isn't it? Take your time but do update! Thank you for the story.

You've got a very interesting story brewing here. I'm one of those readers who doesn't mind the slower parts of stories si I say 'Get in your details and allow yourself to tell a story'. I pretty sure people are just as fascinated with Lillia as Zin is so I hope to see more soon
Read ya Later