rate_review Reviews

A good story but I was hoping for a Pi/Haseo scene or a Pi/Haseo/Atoli. Please go further with this idea.

Wow... This story is just... WOW!
It's been a long while since I've seen a good .hack fic, and using Pi just made it all the better. The fact that it actually has a plot and not just mindless sex is also a good point.
Seeing how the story ends makes me hope for another chapter. Please update this when possible.

I had another chapter in mind when I first wrote this story (as you can kind of see by how it ends), but I never got around to it. When I have more free time for new material, we'll see what I'm more drawn toward (though honestly, I want to add a new Valkyria Chronicles chapter because it's been sitting there for about a month and a half). There's definitely a lot to work with for Atoli given her bit of "I WANT YOU TO LOOK AT ME" in the game. And I'm glad to hear the focus being on Pi made it better, the character catches my fancy but I rarely see any stories or art, adult or otherwise, done of her.

RALTESE, YOU SAID LEAVE A REVIEW, so I am. It's nice, you are slowly working up to the hardcore super porn stories that fabled giants like Streti have been doing for years.
Keep at it, guy, and I'll fap to your stories until I shoot blanks eventually.

Thanks man! I actually used to have quite a lot of stories around, but most of the old ones are really, really bad quality so the ones I'm re-formatting and spread are recent enough for me to be comfortable with their quality. There's also a series of images that were done for me by an artist for one of those stories, but it's a story I feel differently these days about having written. All in all, thanks for letting me know you liked it! It's nice to know people are reading it, but it's better when I know if what I've written is working at all.