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March 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A great story. Would have loved to read more. the characters were all interesting and I loved the fact that the perverted stuff wasn't forced. 8/10
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October 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is why you dont watch fmj and play fallout :)
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September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I hope this hasn't been abandoned.
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, the fifth chapter and the inclusion of the Lone Wanderer surprised me! In addition I noticed you included what happens when you go to leave the Super-Duper Mart during the Wasteland Survival Guide quest. Good idea! Overall it's excellent. I await another update. If there is one.
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
not a bad story, I wan to see more, you are a good writer
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June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know I kinda figured that ending, some type of encounter with the Lone Wanderer and probably ending in death.
Or in being mezzed and sent to paradise falls.
The Lone Wanderer in this story sounded more like the harden wastelander towards the end of the game then the fresh from the vault kid most likely to be doing the wasteland survival guide.
Or in being mezzed and sent to paradise falls.
The Lone Wanderer in this story sounded more like the harden wastelander towards the end of the game then the fresh from the vault kid most likely to be doing the wasteland survival guide.
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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the sex scenes; the hot and nasty has always been my kryptonite when it comes to writing though, sure I can script a fight scene so satisfying you'll cum in your pants from reading it and afterward be left with a strong desire to smoke a cigarette, but when it comes to sex scenes I REALLY need to refine my craft a little. What's your secret?
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you keep on with this and haven't forgotten about it, it's really good.
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good work. A typo here and there, but otherwise, no complaints. Interesting story and characters. Tophat's flirtations with Candy, especially in the second chapter, were very hot. Given that the group is looking for new recruits, it would be intriguing if they find a female member of the Brotherhood of Steel, or an unlucky woman who left her Vault...
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was extremely well writen. I had even gotten some more insight into the characters personalities. I look forward to seeing what your next chapter will be. Already I am hooked to this story, and have been since I read the first chapter.