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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I haven't play the game yet but I like this story keep it coming
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An idea of a story you could do; The first time Tsugu pounded Sisuca's ass! I'll bet she was pleasantly when it turned out he was the dominant party and not the other way around!
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very nice story! I'd say it has better flow than your previous one. Telling it from Liu's point of view works very well and Liu's personality is also well handled, especially the introspection with his brief annoyance. The Alpha Tenkai thing is taken to humorous heights with husbands bragging about Tsugu sleeping with their wives. :)
It also helps develop the game's opening setting, adding something slightly out of ordinary and mysterious into the mix. I like the continued mentions of Sisuca of course, and it's a rather damning statement from Marica when she misinterprets Liu's insinuation and flusters, “Shame on you, Liu! She’s my sister! I would never-“
Afterwards, there's also a nice mention when Marica and her dress is covered with Tsugu's clingy spooge and he mentions, "Sisuca likes to wear my cum," creating another raunchy scene with just a simple note.
Out of the ideas you mention at the end, I like the Ramin and Rina/Eilie/Riou/Jowy ones most.
And thanks for the props, you're welcome! I would also be quite pleased to see your continuation to "Good Clean Fun", though you could also use a different time and a new orgy besides a direct continuation. Most of my stories are actually open for new chapters by other authors, and I have considered proposing that all of my Suikoden stories are available to other authors for continuation, even potentially unfinished ones. Good Clean Fun should already be open for adding additional chapters. Feel free to contact me at thestreti@gmail.com if you wish to discuss further.
It also helps develop the game's opening setting, adding something slightly out of ordinary and mysterious into the mix. I like the continued mentions of Sisuca of course, and it's a rather damning statement from Marica when she misinterprets Liu's insinuation and flusters, “Shame on you, Liu! She’s my sister! I would never-“
Afterwards, there's also a nice mention when Marica and her dress is covered with Tsugu's clingy spooge and he mentions, "Sisuca likes to wear my cum," creating another raunchy scene with just a simple note.
Out of the ideas you mention at the end, I like the Ramin and Rina/Eilie/Riou/Jowy ones most.
And thanks for the props, you're welcome! I would also be quite pleased to see your continuation to "Good Clean Fun", though you could also use a different time and a new orgy besides a direct continuation. Most of my stories are actually open for new chapters by other authors, and I have considered proposing that all of my Suikoden stories are available to other authors for continuation, even potentially unfinished ones. Good Clean Fun should already be open for adding additional chapters. Feel free to contact me at thestreti@gmail.com if you wish to discuss further.