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October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This... I don't know. It seems well intentioned, but ultimately the whole drive of the story is towards the sex scenes, which is just shallow.
There's a bit of a message towards controlling sexual urges, which is nice, but given that the sexual urges Mia has are towards a guy she hates with all her heart, the message comes out too weak. If she were resisting the urge to have sex with a guy she likes, or at least doesn't actively hate, this story might have some decent meaning to it. As it is, it's just another story where the characters think of nothing but sex.
There's a bit of a message towards controlling sexual urges, which is nice, but given that the sexual urges Mia has are towards a guy she hates with all her heart, the message comes out too weak. If she were resisting the urge to have sex with a guy she likes, or at least doesn't actively hate, this story might have some decent meaning to it. As it is, it's just another story where the characters think of nothing but sex.
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, foolish Alex.... just can't satisfy Mia, can he?
BTW, I do plan on finishing the Alt end to Perfect Bait, it's just that Coated in Affection is taking most of my time, though it's almost done, so I should get back to that. Glad to see that some of us are continuing to keep the Golden Sun section active!
BTW, I do plan on finishing the Alt end to Perfect Bait, it's just that Coated in Affection is taking most of my time, though it's almost done, so I should get back to that. Glad to see that some of us are continuing to keep the Golden Sun section active!