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by PastelInk

schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this ridiculously much. I really love the way you write-my eyes were glued to every word.

Which of course, meant that the last line of chapter one came as something of a cruel surprise . . . but I forgive you.

I know its been a while since you updated, but I'm just as bad about mine; I hope you're still continuing anyway, because this is just too hot to miss!

Dina
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
005.
Haha, oh man.
The last line killed me, that was the best.
I couldn't stop laughing xD

011.
All through out this chapter I was all
'Go Emil, go!'
;-; It was pretty cute!

021.
Haha, the last line was pretty funny here too.
I can't help but really pity Emil's situation though...
;-;

person KageSora
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Ratatosk x Emil is hot... Even if the main point of this isn't about that. XD
person Niffty24
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FUCK YES. This was awesome and so, so very hot.