AFF Fiction Portal
person nicole
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was BEATIFUL:3
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do like this, a lot. But check the spelling, add a few more details in there, and really capture their emotions better during the sex. Also, crude ways of talking aren't really the way to go for most fic readers so try not to use too much of that. Personally it's a turn off but I like this one.
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool story. Wesker abusing Chris is always fun =]
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was fucking hot. I loved the dialogue, your descriptions of Wesker and how Chris acted like such a little pussy...everything was so polished, sexy and beautifully written. There were a few spelling errors, however, but I'm sure you'll fix those :) Amazing work, hope to read more soon.

Love,
Miss Sinful