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for Tempting the Snake

by JackieBlue

schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is actually very nicely written! Hope you continue it, eventually.
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Liking this story so far. Hope you continue to write it :)
person daveb
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice work, very promising. One detail though, the power suit repairs itself with time.