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THanks for the non-yaoi MMZ fic! Not much on the genre but so little to choose from and at least you write well!

any chance for femCopyX and femGuardians (forgot their official title)?

Omega has a much more advanced AI than his canon counterpart. Why is that? Such a thing would make him much harder to control. where is his Omega body? Will he obtain the Dark Elf? Will he fuse with Cyper X or the physical manifestation of Cyper Zero (his canon self)? Zero has a much more advanced AI and combat data/skills considering the beatdown Omega got in canon both in the past (when Zero was using a body he never had before) and in MMZ3 so adding him, his skills, and his calmness/analytical abilities would make Omega a much better warrior.

ch2
I will COME with you and help you

TO copy Zero (or TO MAKE A Copy Zero)

how is he balancing her on his finger?

how did the capsule not only break his programming but create an AI from Ghost Files? the best equivalent analagy i can think of is a person spitting in blood and a new human being spontaneously made.

ch3
technically Fafnir is her son not brother; she made him.

I hope you continue this.

There was one Mega Man.exe lemon fic i liked but the site it was on has been dead for quite a few years now. there was a MMZ fic as well. fanfics were tertiary to the site so it only had the two.

Holy cow Im so glad you updated you made my week.. NO NO my month.. NO WAIT my year seriously. I always looked and was like oh story how I wished.. But im so happyyou did! I could cry <3 this is amazing. and woot ciel is gonna do that!? Oh man you also make Omega so cool. thankyou so much!

Wow, this has been a long time coming. As I said last time, it was worth the wait. I was surprised to see Fefnir himself show up here, and Omega's combat prowess was impressive, if a little extreme. I suppose that is to be expected for the best that Wiel could develop/modify, but it does take a little tension out of the plot; he's going to massacre anyone that steps into his path.

Ciel's strip was pretty informative. Good concept for the suit and such and her vulnerability depicted here.

Looking forward to the next update, even if it is a couple of years away.

Wanted to thankyou for not updateing such a awsome story for 2 years. made me cry. = n =. -is still crying-
Not enough awesomeness like this...

Just a friendly reminder review to incase you forgot about this. It's a good story that definitely needs a conclusion contributed toward it! So please, show us some progress in the next few months :D

Well well. The update speed is rather slow, but the progress seems worth it nevertheless. Omega's reactions feel true to his personality as it is developed/displayed, and the same can be said of Ciel, however I would have expected some degree of flinching or otherwise a showing of pain at his teeth sinking into her neck.

I agree with your sentiments to draw it out rather than just 'stick it in' and be done with things. Do you intend to follow the story through at least Zero`1 or only in so far as Omega dominating Ciel a few times?

This is a curious idea and one I can not say I have seen used before.

I look forward to seeing the actual 'lemon' scenes.

This automatically gets my approval!


Furthermore, any plans for Omega to violate Leviathan as well? I can see him enjoying her body, and her enjoying being treated like dirt.