rate_review Reviews

This has so far been a pleasure to read.

Both the Carth and Bastila sex scenes are extremely well-written; I was very surprised when I saw it was your first time writing such scenes.

Your general writing style is also mature and impressive. It certainly stands out in the top tier amongst AFF, at least. I like the way you add extra story to some of the boring side-quests like the Sith party and rich girl - it really keeps the plot more fresh and interesting for someone who's already played the game.

I look forward to reading more of this, well done.

I love it! A good retelling of KotOR and don't worry about the sex scenes, they were fine. I can't wait for Zira and Carth to hook up!

I haven't finished the story yet, but I liked what I've seen so far. The key to sex scenes is to make it agonizingly long. Tease the reader with it. Make them sweat to get through it. That way, when they finally get to the climax they're more than ready to explode. I liked how you did Bastila's scene. I loved how naive she was, and its always fun to see some one knock her off her high horse. Keep up the good work, Bravo!

This is really good, easily the best retelling of KotOR I've read. Love the detail and the writing style, keep it up!