rate_review Reviews

I enjoyed this first chapter a lot! You write very well. I too felt sorry for Daxter -- you made his troubles out as very realistic. I was sad that his relationship with Tess didn't work out, but I do look forward to seeing what the future holds for him. Hopefully it will be something good!

I'll definitely be awaiting the next installment :)

Wow... I'm gonna try not to get excited about this yet since it's only one chapter in, but... Very nice. You're articulate and thorough, not at all jumpy or rushed, good job! Authors obviously make Daxter's misery over being an Ottsel a large part of the story, but not quite like you. You manage to make Daxter's misery very down to Earth and real, not just some minor nuisance to be forgotten until it can be fixed. It really helps in sympathizing with the character, I don't normally actually feel bad for Daxter! Sorry, I took a Critical Writing class and it sorta takes over my reviews sometimes... Anyway, you have a fantastic story so far, keep up the good work! Can't wait for he next chapter!