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Do you have any more Dax/Jak stories?
Loved this!!!!!

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this fic. This has to be one of my favorite fics of all time. It's heart breaking in some places and utterly wonderful and I just want to hug everyone, and I'm glad it worked out for Daxter in the end, because he deserves it.

I don't care how angst this fic got, it was just so personal and deep. You could really see how Dax was having issues giving up the 'him' for the 'them', but then again, doesn't everyone have some of that problem when deciding to enter a deep relationship? I've been reading a lot of Jak and Dax fanfictions lately, and I have to say yours is definatley one of my favorites. Do you have any others for Jak and Daxter? I know I would enjoy them with how much I couldn't stop myself from reading this one to the end. The only thing that slightly bothered me was how Dax was literally like Jelly to any and all whims a-la-Jak. But, eh, whatever. I guess I could see how that would work since they were so close initially- Maybe something to do with the mentality of being a pet loyal to its master no matter what?-and through their trials they just kept on getting that much closer to wanting to be everything to one another. Great job on this story (:))

Hey, awesome story. Say, is it possible for you to email me the original lemon between Jak and Daxter? I would really appreciate it. Thanks.

I absolutely love this fic. Its deep and emotional and very well-written. I stayed up until one in the morning reading through it, and it was really worth it. You definately have a knack for this sort of thing.

Well congradulations, job well done! This was a fantastic story, even with the depressing middle part, haha! I hope you decide to write more Jak and Daxter, you have a real knack for it. Maybe a Jak centric story next time? Change of pace, you know? Hopefully see you later!

I have to say, this story is really amazing. The characters are all kept in character and believable, the pace is slow enough to be realistic and yet quick enough that the reader doesn't get bored, and everything is wrapped up into a neat little package. I've enjoyed this story immensely. Thank you for writing it.

LOL I went on here just to make sure I wasn't missing anything... XD

This story makes me want to eat trifle... with my hands.

I can't beleive how utterly... Tense and deppressing your story is.. and yet I love it, poor Daxter, this really does show the more realistic side of J&D rather than the fluffy lovely yaoi stories where they fall in love and fuck. It's a lot less comical than the games also, which just adds perfectly to the whole thing. I love the fact you made the 'precursors' liars, I mean seriously... ottsel gods? I look forward to reading the final chapters.

7/10

wow! two new chapters! and as for the 'rush' thing, it just seems like sometimes you maybe jump a step or two in either the story or character's thinking. it's tiny! it's definitely very tiny! but it's still a half-step ahead.

for me at least. and it might jsut be me. like I wonder about the ride back from the precursor ruin that day. or how Dax has adjusted beside/behind Jak etc. just little thoughts that have obviously been dealt with in the story, but not before us, the reader.

that's not to say I'm trying to criticize! just if you were curious/value feedback at all. I thoroughly enjoy reading this story, it's a lot of fun! there are definite funny moments and I really enjoy reading about the world as you flesh it out for us as well.

yeah. good stuff.