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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Huh. It's funny what you notice after a second readthrough: I didn't realize that Eirika was awake during Ephraim's second visit unitl I reread it.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I apologize for forgetting to review Chapter 4, I had people over when you posted it, and sadly never got around to posting it before you took it down, or it got removed, or whatever.
Thus, this is more for that chapter than this, which I believe I've reviewed.
The chapter was awesome in it's own right. More than just Ephraim's normal vices, he's actually moving towards penetration. I still can't wait for him to finish the dead, so to speak. Perhaps Eirika enjoying the act?
Thus, this is more for that chapter than this, which I believe I've reviewed.
The chapter was awesome in it's own right. More than just Ephraim's normal vices, he's actually moving towards penetration. I still can't wait for him to finish the dead, so to speak. Perhaps Eirika enjoying the act?
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And out of the few hundred viewers during that time and after, you were still the only one that reviewed. If you want to read the fourth chapter again, or be notified in case I continue the story, feel free to contact me at thestreti@gmail.com.
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And Ephraim sinks deeper into depravity!
My current guess is in three more chapters, if that, for him fully caving in
My current guess is in three more chapters, if that, for him fully caving in
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April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story meriting nothing but the finest of reviews and one's most fervent hopes of its continuation.
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Exquisitely done again. I have to say that the kind of progression you have in this story has it's advantages over a direct gangbang or cumfest -- you can savor the development more.
I read this while I was eating... I don't know if I can finish soup without thinking if it has an extra ingredient I don't want to be there. lol I hold you responsible for putting that sort of fear in me.
I read this while I was eating... I don't know if I can finish soup without thinking if it has an extra ingredient I don't want to be there. lol I hold you responsible for putting that sort of fear in me.
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha, awesome! I just saw the new chapter after getting your PM, and I love it! Ephraim just can't control himself around his sister, and who can blame him?
I'm wondering how many chapters it'll take until he pins her down and takes her again and again?
I'm wondering how many chapters it'll take until he pins her down and takes her again and again?
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is certainly interesting. I like seeing you try different things, and in this case it works quite well.
While somewhat less direct than your other work, I find this style to be every bit as interesting and erotic. Kudos for your excellent detail and characterizations.
If you continue this story, I'll be interested to see how it develops. If not, it works fine as a oneshot.
While somewhat less direct than your other work, I find this style to be every bit as interesting and erotic. Kudos for your excellent detail and characterizations.
If you continue this story, I'll be interested to see how it develops. If not, it works fine as a oneshot.
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad oneshot Streti! Sacred Stones has in my opinion probably one of the most blatant examples of incest in the series.
Naturally, I would have preferred Eirika to get into the act, but the fic works quite well even without it.
Naturally, I would have preferred Eirika to get into the act, but the fic works quite well even without it.